Critiquer | Critiquer® Admin | Activity https://www.critiquer.com/members/admin/activity/ Activity feed for Critiquer® Admin. Mon, 27 Apr 2026 05:29:42 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v=2.1.0 en 30 hourly 2 eca8fda2b36139eb5d19f34b08fb5f56 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9767/#acomment-9770 Fri, 15 Dec 2023 20:51:10 -0500 Looks great, just a suggestion about the post, maybe take a photo of it on a wall. It seems to be camped

In reply to - David posted an update ]]> 23b6a78b83d5f9fa1255649770a62d14 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9748/#acomment-9749 Sun, 03 Sep 2023 17:19:19 -0400 Just a prior note, please try to upload higher resolution images for critiques, low resolution hinders the critique. It’s hard to tell how this image was rendered because of the low resolution. However this looks to be very acceptable.

In reply to - Elisabeth posted an update

Vorhin fragte ich die KI von Bing, ob sie in der Lage ist, meine Pinselführung bezüglich einem von mir gemalten Bild zu beurteilen. Bei meinen Ausstellungen erfuhr ich jeweils gute K […]

]]> e4bded99beb72f61e72fc1b6589c1f60 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9731/#acomment-9734 Sun, 04 Jun 2023 17:14:03 -0400 Some of the graphics overlap and are cut off which doesn’t look professional. You could try adjusting the layout to be a little more organized and add hierarchy so people have a flow of what to read.

In reply to - Dicas posted an update

I created an advertisement to use on Facebook Ads. I would like an honest evaluation, explaining where I went wrong and where I can improve. (This message is written in Portuguese, Brazil)

]]> b7a08c77689497edece42ec3de96402a Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9712/#acomment-9717 Mon, 09 Jan 2023 20:10:38 -0500 The home page is nice, on mobile, the top gradient is a little distracting from the content. You may want to find a way to balance that a little. Nice job otherwise

In reply to - Deborah posted an update

This is a landing page I designed, with content I could not change, I had to write it that way.
Please give me your critique.

https://oneai-prototype.webflow.io/

]]> 50b90400820016b7ea848898c3049281 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9618/#acomment-9621 Wed, 27 Apr 2022 00:56:39 -0400 This is an interesting sculpture. You are losing some of the detail with the black. So you could try a lighter color, or something to bring out the detail. Nice work!

In reply to - Steve posted an update ]]> f612ba2e801d1be3f5c9a8bb9a672380 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9591/#acomment-9598 Thu, 24 Feb 2022 15:52:21 -0500 Can’t really comment on her name change. Thats totally up to you. But the website looks good! I would add more to the portfolio section. The website looks very professional and experienced but the portfolio doesn’t reflect that in amount of work. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Clement posted an update

Hello,


Please critique my website https://www.redappleconnect.co.za. Also am planning to change my business name to Pixel connect, is it viable or not

Thank you.

]]> 8764860ade371121975ed19ede84c9d1 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9584/#acomment-9588 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 16:05:12 -0500 The thing with abstract art is you are the artist, you decide how you could improve it based on your vision. Unfortunately critiquing abstract art usually isn’t helpful because it’s not like you are constrained to a specific set of rules, just your vision. Without knowing that vision, it’s hard to critique. 

In reply to - John posted an update

Hi, I would love some feedback on my art, where can I improve?

]]> 9a292c87fde8d0f49368c6079cad7426 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9581/#acomment-9582 Mon, 07 Feb 2022 13:56:07 -0500 Nice work on your portfolio! You have a good range of work showing what you are capable of. Honestly the biggest issue I see is some pages have large white space gaps which make the page feel empty. If you could get rid of those it would improve things quite a bit. The only other thing I might suggest is work on the typography hierarchy, Use bold… Read more

In reply to - Courtney posted an update

Hello,

I would love some feedback on my portfolio website.

I’m a freelancer whose been working for several years. I would love honest feedback so I can grow. Also, if anyone could let me […]

]]> df347dfe6816ed7e905b75bb37367035 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9570/#acomment-9571 Mon, 08 Nov 2021 18:52:07 -0500 The website looks great! A few suggestions. Some of the lighter text is too light and a little hard to see. The home page feels a little empty compared to the rest of the website. So you may consider striking a balance between the home page and the fullness of the other pages. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Jason posted an update

Hi everyone, Im looking for feedback on my portfolio website https://jasonohstudios.com
Love or hate, any comments are greatly appreciated!!

]]> 527da91edded628e9a09a4a5a5d89572 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9566/#acomment-9567 Wed, 03 Nov 2021 13:41:39 -0400 Looks great! I would try to diversify your portfolio to show you can do more than just logos. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Anum posted an update

Hey All ! Would Love to have some feedback on my designs.

My portfolio: https://www.behance.net/itsanumakhtar


]]> 7e92108b71c3289fefbce9860ce95ae6 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9561/#acomment-9562 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 12:54:36 -0400 This looks good and gets your point across. You may try having the message be a little more pronounced to make it clearer. However that it is up to you.

In reply to - Aparna posted an update

I made this for the Animal welfare day. Honest feedbacks are appreciated 🙂

https://www.instagram.com/p/CUmIAZWBmKB/?utm_medium=copy_link

]]> e21287b722f93df5fbd0ca7e6aaba8f8 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9550/#acomment-9555 Tue, 14 Sep 2021 13:01:29 -0400 I like this better

In reply to - Dan posted an update

Hello, I created a logo for a waterfront development in Florida and would like some critiques and suggestions on how to make this perfect.

]]> 19205e289307c0e9b2510aa487fef984 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9550/#acomment-9551 Wed, 08 Sep 2021 14:09:30 -0400 Nice work so far! The negative space between the houses is a little uneven, if you can even it out it would improve this quite a bit. The orange circle where it meets the left house created a little bit of a glaring focal point, you can fix that my making the circle a touch bigger. The typography is a bit bland compared to the rest of the logo,… Read more

In reply to - Dan posted an update

Hello, I created a logo for a waterfront development in Florida and would like some critiques and suggestions on how to make this perfect.

]]> 37d0afc6850797ff1a4d11a516569ff9 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9541/#acomment-9547 Tue, 31 Aug 2021 16:53:03 -0400 These look great! The “up to 50% off” is a little small on the Home one. On the one with the yellow couch, the text on the bottom is a little too tight, where it has the light blue background. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Ria posted an update

Hi , i created these roll up standees could you please share your feedback so i can improve.

]]> 8053b9a54266268e7d57d6f7f1c97ec9 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9536/#acomment-9537 Sat, 21 Aug 2021 14:22:28 -0400 Looks great, you might want to try adding some contour cross hatching to the shadows. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Roberto posted an update

Here is a sketch that I made using the Andrew Loomis method. Any honest criticism would be appreciated.

]]> 4ff9e4902170c24e639a716eed11f76c Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9530/#acomment-9531 Thu, 24 Jun 2021 14:42:38 -0400 This looks great. My only critique would be making sure the main text has all solid behind it. I like what’s behind it, but the lines going through Kombucha are distracting. Keep up the good work and please provide some critiques too!

In reply to - Aleeha posted an update

I designed a label for a drink. Would really appreciate if I could get any critique on it.

]]> 5dcf52f19c1734d4e6412918a16c0a40 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9516/#acomment-9527 Tue, 08 Jun 2021 19:36:58 -0400 Nice work. Looks like there is a lot of variance in leading (space between lines). You can easily adjust that, so give that a look. You may also want to try adding different methods of hierarchy to draw the reader’s attention in the proper order. Keep up the good work and don’t forget to critique your peers here on Critiquer!

In reply to - Shy posted an update

I started a project to make 10 typography layouts a week for 7 weeks straight, included in the the futur typography 01 course bundle. This is the 1st week using only one typeface and one […]

]]> 5b8f0ef2dfec77877e02b4f7e0b46f6f Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9512/#acomment-9513 Tue, 08 Jun 2021 00:28:23 -0400 Nice work so far. There are too many lines that are sideways. They are confusing the reader even though they aren’t really words yet. Also be careful stacking words on top of each other as it causes tension. Keep up the good work and please give some of your peers a critique!

In reply to - Yannick posted an update

Hi! I’m beginning typography and would appreciate it if someone could give a brief critique. I’m feeling like there are a few mistakes, but I just can’t put my finger on them.

]]> 5bcc30815cc46e03afe587bb0cd52071 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9509/#acomment-9510 Thu, 20 May 2021 18:03:09 -0400 This looks nice, maybe try correcting the typography to make it a little more legible. It would be cool to incorporate more of the mirror into the design that was painted. Keep up the good work, and don’t forget to critique others!

In reply to - Mai posted an update

Hi! any critiques would be appreciated, especially on the eyes. Thank you!

Acrylic paint on mirror

]]> a80184eb3e9df2e7d6b158ee6b92a0bf Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9502/#acomment-9506 Mon, 17 May 2021 19:17:27 -0400 This is nice. Try to add a little more detail or clarity to the background, even for a rough sketch like this. Other than that, it looks great! Don’t forget to critique others!

In reply to - Eva posted an update

Needing critique! Thanks!

]]> b392dc93d572829cf99b71da8d59f79d Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9499/#acomment-9504 Fri, 14 May 2021 11:53:01 -0400 The A looks a bit tight compared to the rest 

In reply to - Hoàng posted an update

I’m practicing typography, some critique would be greatly appreciated!

]]> 528a15f5baacab83732c69bcf715e3c5 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9499/#acomment-9500 Thu, 13 May 2021 17:06:41 -0400 This looks great. The only real issue im seeing is the letter spacing on Avenir, its just a little off here and there. But that is a pretty focused critique. Nice work! Before to give others a critique!

In reply to - Hoàng posted an update

I’m practicing typography, some critique would be greatly appreciated!

]]> 6a3d4e9ef1633f6f24d27363d766380d Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9493/#acomment-9496 Wed, 05 May 2021 16:53:31 -0400 Nice work so far. The buttons and photos, not the thumbnails, look to be too big. One of the biggest problems with the site right now is the site doesn’t automatically scale to width. This will do a huge disservice and make the whole website feel cramped. Check out some examples of portfolio websites and see how you can make yours more like your… Read more

In reply to - Scott posted an update

Hoping to get an independent opinion of my website. I know there are issues that could use some attention, but the best opinions on how to action them would be helpful. Please be as detailed […]

]]> d89f79866485318f1471409d6e272804 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9494/#acomment-9495 Wed, 05 May 2021 16:48:32 -0400 Check the leading, space between each line, its very uneven. Also the whole composition feels cramped. Work on some ways to resolve that.

In reply to - Dan posted an update

I made a graphic to tell people never to use comic sans. Any feedback on my design would help.

]]> e707e4fba11dbdf9bab0302a93e97e64 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9482/#acomment-9484 Tue, 27 Apr 2021 17:59:26 -0400 It’s a little tight on the edges, work on your type lockup to make it more even. Look for some good examples. You also may want to work on the wording, its a bit clunky.

In reply to - Dan posted an update

I decided to go with a different design, different from my last one. Is this any better?

]]> 52aa3f9da1c74b17120099edcab8f966 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9479/#acomment-9480 Mon, 26 Apr 2021 15:34:57 -0400 A project brief would help

In reply to - Dan posted an update

cant figure out what to put on the sticky notes

]]> 60b220c861762e15cd612e9e254803a4 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9455/#acomment-9472 Sat, 24 Apr 2021 02:32:41 -0400 This is nice! Not really much you can improve on here, would love to see it in color. Don’t gorget to give others a critique!

In reply to - ladd posted an update ]]> 3b134de299d9915fc264581d0f88c354 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9423/#acomment-9433 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 18:17:20 -0400 Looks great

In reply to - Justin posted an update

Hello all! I’m in need of some help with a logo that I’m making for my daughters’ softball team. They came up with the name “Mighty Pickles” so I’m trying to have some fun with it. I’m not […]

]]> 8c9aec029ba91e138fb214d855a21375 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9418/#acomment-9429 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 17:23:56 -0400 Selling art is more about making a connection rather than the art itself. 

In reply to - Sherry posted an update

Hello Critiquer friends!

I’m new here and would really love an honest critique of my painting. Also please let me know if you feel it would sell. Thank you ahead of time!

]]> f1d25b542d89180019e7db0167bc4b09 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9423/#acomment-9425 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 17:10:27 -0400 First of all this is awesome for your daughters team, nice work. On the text, you could try increasing the letter spacing so it stretched the whole length of that tail, the font is fine to me. I prefer the blue background, maybe 3 is the best. You might try changing the hair color away from red, I like the pink around the boarder and in wild but… Read more

In reply to - Justin posted an update

Hello all! I’m in need of some help with a logo that I’m making for my daughters’ softball team. They came up with the name “Mighty Pickles” so I’m trying to have some fun with it. I’m not […]

]]> f8ac25d81be079b0ada0a0766cd7cdad Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9418/#acomment-9424 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 17:05:57 -0400 This is nice! Some of the colors in the center of the off white color might be blended too much. Just slightly. If there was more contrast it would be a great focal point. Keep up the good work and don’t forget to critique others!

In reply to - Sherry posted an update

Hello Critiquer friends!

I’m new here and would really love an honest critique of my painting. Also please let me know if you feel it would sell. Thank you ahead of time!

]]> 1da5c641edf01f816c5fe538bb64c455 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9412/#acomment-9415 Sat, 17 Apr 2021 12:28:03 -0400 Its not ugly, its just the shadows and the form are a little stark. Work on the form and lighten up the dark areas a bit and it’ll improve. Where are you getting these terrible critiques?

In reply to - Solomon posted an update

Hello critiquer.com this one also got negative votes and was called ugly I want to make this painting better can you give me some pointers thank you

]]> 65e5b5f5efc67967de1a9fa321fd8c23 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9408/#acomment-9411 Wed, 14 Apr 2021 03:42:07 -0400 I’m curious where you received these negative votes? There’s not really anything wrong with this piece except the way it’s presented. Try to take a better photo with better lighting on the work and maybe it will present better. 

In reply to - Solomon posted an update

Hello guys I posted this and it got negative votes I thought the piece was good so can I have some of your insight on it

]]> 552fa9afc9156c6d2933e3b824a5ca7e Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9404/#acomment-9405 Tue, 06 Apr 2021 17:40:33 -0400 I don’t think you over did the pink. You could easily break it up a bit by making the leaves under the flower a hint of green and the flower petals more red, and also making the ribbon at the bottom more of a red color. This piece has a nice look to it, but you want to be careful of your typeface, its very commonly used in this type of design, and… Read more

In reply to - Rosemarie posted an update

Hello, trying to improve my design skills and I read online that book covers are a good way to practice. I have been reading a lot of Jane Austen recently, and I wanted to make Emma look […]

]]> 967a2a9dc5d5aeb580bdb55308120f29 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9396/#acomment-9401 Sun, 04 Apr 2021 19:37:09 -0400 😀

In reply to - Antony posted an update

Hello everyone! Decided to do a logo redesign for a progressive web app. On the left side there is a new version of the logo. Which one is better? Is it worth using the new version of the […]

]]> db78262c7ebbaa873c172812af388ec7 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9396/#acomment-9398 Sun, 04 Apr 2021 18:36:24 -0400 Nice work. I think the double green version works better. However the 4 colors seem unnecessary. I think you really only need the dark and light green, the highlight/shadow part is extraneous. Thats just my opinion though. Also check your letter spacing, the V is too far away, possibly also the first A which is throwing of the T&U. U&L also need… Read more

In reply to - Antony posted an update

Hello everyone! Decided to do a logo redesign for a progressive web app. On the left side there is a new version of the logo. Which one is better? Is it worth using the new version of the […]

]]> 0fc4eeeb0b09b913c3aa09513c026e55 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9394/#acomment-9397 Sun, 04 Apr 2021 18:27:10 -0400 This is great! You may want to pay attention to the side of the head compared to body on the female character, as her head seems small. Otherwise its really nice. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Pizza posted an update

Hi there, I’m interested in learning anatomy and to be able to draw characters in different poses confidently.

Here is an sketch of mine

]]> 7370fd17e7ecd5c869b7f19cddc6957b Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9386/#acomment-9389 Mon, 29 Mar 2021 19:59:52 -0400 Its hard to fully critique these with photos of a screen, can you post the exported art boards?

In reply to - Sydney posted an update

I’m a student graphic designer and creating my brand. PLEASE CRITIQUE& choose which one looks better for a visual design brand/graphic design greatly appreciated.

]]> 3e6d54943982b8818bcc9b1b5efb822b Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9382/#acomment-9384 Fri, 26 Mar 2021 13:20:42 -0400 This is nice, keep practicing your form and try some different shapes. A contrasting background color would make this piece more interesting. Keep up the good work

In reply to - Liese posted an update

Hey! Just painted this and was wondering if I could get any feed back as a whole. I feel like I have been staring at it for to long. Thanks <3

]]> 7c8146c73dd49af9fa5a61b739de8bd0 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9379/#acomment-9381 Wed, 24 Mar 2021 18:27:28 -0400 This is really nice, I like the way the hair is done. One thing that I think could improve this is the lines around he hands and fingers seem to be blurred. If those were sharpened up and straightened out a little it would look a little more polished 

In reply to - Someone posted an update ]]> 9e548323db70edbc846202dd013d3d3e Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9362/#acomment-9369 Mon, 22 Feb 2021 18:14:18 -0500 Looks great! Excellent progress from your last post.

In reply to - Roberto posted an update

I have drawn this sketch from a 3/4 angle using the Loomis method.

]]> 6a0b045f91e56ecbe2fcf64947366416 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9355/#acomment-9360 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:13:36 -0500 Nice work! Overall the logo is too open and spread out. Try finding a way to tighten up the spacing, maybe move to a crest logo where all 4 icons are enclosed in a crest, that is above or below the typography. Keep up the good work and don’t forget to critique others!

In reply to - James posted an update

Hello, I’m interested in stating a campaign to raise awareness of homelessness in the UK and Ireland. I’ve designed a logo for the UK branch with a typography and some icons. May I have some […]

]]> 81c1672c55e12fb4bd1be42690f82e35 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9354/#acomment-9359 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:11:43 -0500 This looks nice, check your alignment, your text doesn’t line up to the center or to the left. Next time you post for a critique, a project brief would help!

In reply to - James posted an update

Hello, I’m interested in starting graphic design and I was wondering if I could have some feedback on the typography and design of this please.

]]> 30290100d8dc599b4de8bd28e6816c7f Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9357/#acomment-9358 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:10:38 -0500 Nice work! You may want to work on the paragraph layout so the lines of text don’t look so uneven. You can change the word spacing/paragraph styles or manually adjust where the words land I the paragraph so the edges of the paragraph are more even. 
Also the subtitle text in white over green looks “slapped on”. You could rotate the text to match… Read more

In reply to - Adepa posted an update

Hello Everyone,

Am a new designer work on my first client product. What do you think of this Lablel?

Especially, the fonts and arrangement. Thank you so much for your feedback


]]> b4abfd0ba0f8cd6499dd11a9a6d75e68 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9350/#acomment-9351 Mon, 15 Feb 2021 17:44:56 -0500 Nice work, very unique style. It seems this could use some color correction in photoshop. It’s either that or the shadows and highlights are too contrasted and it makes the whole piece feel hazy. Thats the biggest issue for me but it may be preference. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - lysiass posted an update

Hi i’m new here and i want to improve so would like to receive critique for my art.

]]> 83e72f994499b9e0f9d0a8ec53841be7 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9346/#acomment-9349 Sun, 14 Feb 2021 22:43:18 -0500 You’re definitely in the right place! Nice work. The text and the bullets look great, however there is too much green which is causing everything to blend together. This could easily be solved by using a different/complimentary background color. This way your text and subjects will stand out more, as they should. Keep up the good work!

In reply to - Summer posted an update

Hello everyone 😊 I am new here and have been looking for a place to get my graphic design work critiqued…I hope I’m in the right place 😆

So this my the most recent project I’ve been working […]

]]> 7987fd5f054713b3a9a502f472f02642 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9340/#acomment-9342 Wed, 27 Jan 2021 22:13:16 -0500 Nice work! Based on what I believe you are going for this looks a bit flat. Try working on adding to the depth and it will improve it greatly!

In reply to - Roberto posted an update

This is another sketch I did Loomis Style.

]]> e7b98d23088aa98f1be0e9aec09dbb24 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9335/#acomment-9338 Tue, 26 Jan 2021 23:46:49 -0500 Your original is still your strongest. The last feels empty compared to the others. II looks good and may be a little more focused but I is the clearest and best of the three. Don’t underestimate a design if its working!

In reply to - Kevin posted an update

Decided to make changes/update to own monogram. I am a graphic designer and considering a marks that’s more memorable and impactful. Had sketched and vectorized many before but below are the […]

]]> 5c50bd3bef722e883c3f0682e302dff8 Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9322/#acomment-9326 Sat, 09 Jan 2021 20:12:29 -0500 Nice work! The first one in black and white work better than the rest. Be careful of your letter spacing, some of it looks uneven along with the spacing of the logo mark and the wording. You might also try getting the rounded corners of the icon to be a bit closer to the typeface. 

In reply to - Ridwan posted an update

Hi, everyone. I would like to have some feedback on this personal identity logo project I am working on. I am mainly into engineering and technology but thinking of using logo design as a […]

]]> 17cc1f8ad02489aeddcf580622f7497f Critiquer® posted a new activity comment https://www.critiquer.com/critique-2/p/9314/#acomment-9318 Tue, 29 Dec 2020 05:12:04 -0500 Very nice work, more shading could help but I’m sure you will learn what you need to know in upcoming classes. 

In reply to - Roberto posted an update

Hello. I’ve been watching tutorials about the basic Andrew Loomis drawing method and decided I’ll give it a try before enrolling to drawing and painting classes. What do you think about my […]

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