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Love the eyes, hand seems a little off. I think maybe it should a tad bigger? Also right side of the face could maybe have just a slight but of detail although it could be intentional but reminds me of photos where flash is too hot. Love the facial expressions though, keep up the good work!
Everything seems to be very well defined. I think this piece could benefit from having some areas softened, like the edges of the hair. and around the right side of the jacket where things start to look pillow-y. I do like that the hat seems crooked, like it's about to take off without him! It adds a bit of whimsy and light-heartedness to the piece. I feel like the face is strong, but could perhaps benefit from some darker shadows near the hairline and under the hat.
This is pretty good, but the hat seems to be a bit off centre and the whole thing feels like a mesh of different styles. It's really cool in its own surreal way, though!
Nice work, the face seems to be elongated and the fingers a little crooked. Is that part of the style or just an error?