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The face doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the image. It feels like it should either be completely different, with opaque, solid colors, or more similar to the other lines. The flamelike motifs and black hole bubble are great, and the piece is balanced well.
I really like the colors and concept of this design. However the face gets lost in the texture. Maybe try making the face clearer
I really like the concept for this! You could improve it a little by balancing the face and the light from the black hole. Right now the light is taking away from the face. If you wanted to take it a step further, make a more unique face. Hope this helps!