10 words to go.
Its a song frome Artic monkeys - do i wanna know
Very beautiful. What does the text say? Is it a song or poem?
The illustration fits the text written underneath well and I like how you only used colors for her lips. You should add more depth to her hair instead of shading it like one singular, rather soft surface by putting in more contrasts and allowing to see single strokes following the hair.
This photo angle makes it impossible to see scale and proportion. Nice old school simple tattoo style.
Very nice drawing, the nose might be a little pointed up, making it look like the perspective is off. You could a little more detail to it so it corrects the perspective. Hard to tell from the angle but the shading on the cheeks might be able to be softened.